Wednesday, March 17, 2010

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Summers Whisper


Lying on the lush green grass


Watching fluffy clouds pass lazily


Wasting time away


Warm air dancing across your face


Orange sun rays melt all thoughts


As nothing else seems to exist


A quiet breeze blows softly through the trees


Playful cries of young children


Ring sweetly through the sticky air


Time passes you by


Crickets chirp promises of better times


Shy deer watch you from a distance


As you dream the summer day away


All other thoughts pushed aside


Two blue birds sing sweetly on the branch above you


A song of hope


A song of peace


All the tears are washed away


By gentle summer rains


Lilac scented air breathes around your body


Engulfs your fears


Carries them away with the wind


This is summers gentle whisper

Is this poem any good??? please read and rate!?
this is really good


from 1 to 10 it would have to be a 10
Reply:itz quite good


frm 1 to 10 itz an 8



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