Sunday, March 14, 2010

Does this poem fit the theme "Everywhere"?

A Crayon Colored World





I watch the lime-green bluebirds fly


in a V-shaped band across a tangerine sky


The purple sun peeks silently from


behind the red grass hills where children come


Laughing and singing a new kind of song


and gaze at lilac clouds in a world where all belong


A smile is stretched across every child's face


and there is a feeling of hope, love, and grace.


The apples on trees are as blue as can be


and the yellow flowing ocean stretches as far as you can see.





I look out of my window on a crayon colored world


Drinking orange hot chocolate on the chair where I am curled


Dreaming of this perfect life out there


where children play without a single care


Where dreams are dreamed and hope is real


and every child knows how love can feel

Does this poem fit the theme "Everywhere"?
yes





it is very good too
Reply:That is really good and I think it describes the theme very well!



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