Do you like this poem?

I take a road to a deserted place,


Where lilac felt a lover’s grace.


I see a pine that snowflakes race,


Drip by names that walked these ways.





Now blooms as white the winter howl,


By rusted bench with shivered soul.


A whisper weaved, her warming rays,


“Walk my valley, these lonely days”

Do you like this poem?
good..
Reply:Thats really really beautiful! did you write that? wow! thats nice, i love writing poems but I don't think I could write that!





I take a road to a deserted place,


Where lilac felt a lover’s grace......


.........By rusted bench with shivered soul.


“Walk my valley, these lonely days”.





I mean WOW! its so meaningful and its like - it reminds me of a poem I might write :-





touch the earth, so soft and tender


under the sky, I shall surender.


water so calm, and as bright as your eyes





fireflies kiss the night sky and it is you I


fear who shall fly.





sorry if I was real sci-fi-ish and weird but your poem is inspiring!!!!
Reply:Omg.. i love it! it's so serene and somewhat mysterious and it's random... lol, i love poems like tht.


i definitely like the wording!


if u wrote this, then wow, u've definitely got talent! :)
Reply:Thats a very beautiful poem, the words flow very nicely!
Reply:i dont get it completely, but if you wrote it im impressed./





sounds like emerson.
Reply:wow I liked the illiteration on the 7th line,very good.


the whole thing is great.
Reply:It's excellent!
Reply:military?


























uhhhhhhhhhhhhh k
Reply:Very good, very good! Do not stop there!
Reply:Yes, I do like it very much!


Very symbolic





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Reply:you know you're a poet lol
Reply:prety cool
Reply:yes its very pretty
Reply:Very good.
Reply:don't understand it
Reply:sure
Reply:nice!!
Reply:What poem?
Reply:Nice, i wish i could write poems like that
Reply:It's okay. I like songs better though.
Reply:i like it! did you write it?



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