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Summers Whisper


Lying on the lush green grass


Watching fluffy clouds pass lazily


Wasting time away


Warm air dancing across your face


Orange sun rays melt all thoughts


As nothing else seems to exist


A quiet breeze blows softly through the trees


Playful cries of young children


Ring sweetly through the sticky air


Time passes you by


Crickets chirp promises of better times


Shy deer watch you from a distance


As you dream the summer day away


All other thoughts pushed aside


Two blue birds sing sweetly on the branch above you


A song of hope


A song of peace


All the tears are washed away


By gentle summer rains


Lilac scented air breathes around your body


Engulfs your fears


Carries them away with the wind


This is summers gentle whisper

Is this poem any good??? please read and rate!?
WOW! This is really awesome! From 1 to 10 it would have to be a smashing10!!!.
Reply:wha- wha- wha - dear . wonderful-superb.





it appears you are a great lover of nature.remains so immersed that your poetic thoughts search and gets pearls, motis, diamonds in the nature in terms of birds leaves and flowers. your vocabulary of nature is very impressive.the best part is that it is full of hopes and is POSITIVE in nature


i love the poem from the core of my heart.i wish you best of luck
Reply:it has a spiritual effect i felt warmth and tranquility, i am so impress from your lovely poem. wish for you to keep writing this kind of meaningful poem.


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Reply:Ok I request you,one thing. You compose this poem and try singing it. If you could do it, it's wornderful poem and if you could't then its beautiful thought as such.





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Vinay
Reply:luvely heading to being a poet


or copied from net


then u'll become annu malik all nusrat sahab song cpoied by him
Reply:You have use the poetic cliches like whisper, lush green,fluffy cloud, danging, quiet breeze etc. Well. I am not amused.
Reply:This is an amazing poem. If you wrote it I'm truly impressed


You have a deeper understand of life not many others can grasp.
Reply:It is a good poetic exercise. You've stacked some very nice comparisons on your list. It could be trimmed down a bit, but not bad, overall. TD
Reply:wow it is just fantastic and i think u can be a good poet,Just try ur luck dear in poetry
Reply:hey this is a beautiful poem...


n i'll surely rate atleast 4 for it....


i really liked it...n who has written it...
Reply:Good eco-friendly poem... I have rated!
Reply:It is a lovely poem -can you set it to music ?
Reply:to much reading but sure
Reply:i like your poem very very very very muchhhhhh......


i would give a 10 star


thank you



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